Posted: Sun Dec 25, 2011 5:21 am Post subject: Katie Uzumaki
Full Name: Katie Uzumaki
Rank: Academy Ninja
Age: 13
Height: 5"7
Weight: 152 pounds
Gender: Female
Blood type: AB
Village: Hidden Leaf
Element: Fire
Family: Yuri Uzumaki (18 years old, older sister, alive), Ella Uzumaki (12 years old, Younger sister, alive) Mei Li Uchiha (45 years old, mother, dead) Karuyo uzumaki (47 years old, father, dead)
Biography: When Katie was two, Ella was one, and Yuri was 8, their parents were killed by a rogue ninja. Yuri then left the village with Katie and ella, and took care of them. When Katie was five, they stayed in the sand village for three years. After that, they were traveling, never really settling down. During an incident with another rouge ninja, the stress from the battle caused katie to unlock her sharingan early. Yuri then explained that their mother had been an uchiha, but she had died when they were too young to remember. When yuri turned 18, she decided they should go back to the leaf village permanently. Yuri almost immediatly got a job as a medical ninja, and Katie and Ella entered into the academy.
Personality: Loving and usually nice, but if you insult her family she'll severly injure you. She likes to train, and she isn't impressed by the top male ninjas like all the rest of the girls are. She hates it when insulted about her wait, because she weighs a lot but its because she has big bones, curves, and lots of muscle.
Clan: Uchiha
Kekkei Genkai/Known Ability of Clan: sharingan
Known Quotes: "Talk about my family in a bad way....and i'll kill you"
"I prefer to eat well and train hard then be an anorexic girly creep."
"Isnt that kitten cute?"
Other:
Star Sign: Virgo
Looks: Long, light blonde hair, blue eyes. Wears a light blue shirt and black ninja shorts.
stats: (On a scale from 1-10, 10 being the highest. You can only have a 9/10 on one, 7/8 on two and the other four are inbetween 1-5)
Strengh: 7/8
Stamina: 2/5
speed: 9/10
genjutsu: 4/5
ninjutsu: 4/5
taijutsu: 3/5
chakra: 7/8
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Posted: Sun Jan 01, 2012 2:08 am Post subject:
Just a couple of things, nothing serious.
First, I'd like to see a little more detail in the history. For example, what did Katie do in the Sand Village? Did she have a lot of friends or was she a loner? Was she picked on? Also about the Sharingan what exactly happened that caused her to obtain it? Was a friend or sibling being attacked, etc? Does Katie want revenge on the rouge ninja?
Secondly, I'd like to see a little more detail in her personality. What are her hobbies, what are her likes/dislikes, things like that.
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