Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2011 5:40 pm Post subject: Aiden kamesu
Full Name: Aiden Kamesu
Rank: Academy Ninja
DOB: 7/28
Age: 17
Height: 5'10
Weight: 140
Gender: male
Blood type: AB-
Village: missing nin
Element: water
Family: none
Biography: At a young age he found he had an affinity for sound, he could hear almost everything, he was able to fight with almost no help from his eyes and he could block out all sound and hear nothing if he wanted and he decided to train this skill so that one day he could be like zabuza, a legendary mist swordsman that could fight with no visibility. After he went through the academy in the sound village and passed without ever losing a fight he had almost perfected his technique. He decided then that he would become rouge until he could join the village hidden in the mist and become a legendary swordsman, so he set out looking for the sword that would suit him and decided he wanted two, when he finally found someone to make them he got a katana, but the blade of it was much wider from cutting edge to the back of the blade but it was around the same length as a normal one (picture at bottom) and then he got the sword he named verasune (picture at bottom). He is now 18 and still a rouge but he is considered very dargerous and is now extremely skilled with his swords (he doesnt use both at the same time just one or the other) and he is still trying to find the hidden mist village
Personality: He has anger issues and doesnt really like being around a lot of people, he isnt very popular but he does have a select group of friends who he likes and hangs out with but other than that he isnt very talkative and is very quick to anger. He uses a sword that he is very good with and is also highly trained in taijutsu being that he like up close and personal fights that is all he really uses except for the ocasional jutsu
Known Quotes: in the darkness of night we hear the whispers of the void.
Other:
Star Sign: Leo
Looks:
stats: (On a scale from 1-10, 10 being the highest. You can only have a 9/10 on one, 7/8 on two and the other four are inbetween 1-5)
Strengh: 8
Stamina: 5
speed: 10
genjutsu: 1
ninjutsu: 3
taijutsu: 7
chakra: 5
Last edited by sevryn on Sun Apr 24, 2011 5:15 am; edited 1 time in total
Joined: 16 Nov 2009 Posts: 108 Location: Hell, The True Nightmare Realm
Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2011 11:33 pm Post subject:
Just a couple things:
1. You put his element as water yet in his history you claimed that he had an affinity for sound. An academy ninja would not have two different affinities. Can you always get one later.
2. Everyone starts out in the academy. Then they graduate after learning the necessary jutsu. I believe that was written in the rules, if not sorry about that and just forget I even typed this. ^^
3. He is seventeen years old but there isn't a lot of detail in his history.
1. i didnt know sound was a element???
2. sorry i looked at the templates and other peoples apps and i saw all of them puting these ones down so i did sorry
3. yeah i want him to be 17 but then i saw i was a academy student so i only went as far as that for history
4. my bad ill make it right now
Joined: 16 Nov 2009 Posts: 108 Location: Hell, The True Nightmare Realm
Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2011 9:43 am Post subject:
Sorry, I guess I worded that wrong. Sound is not an element but people like Dosu, Zaku, and Kin, use sound instead of a traditional element. In my mind this kind of made sound a make-shift element. It doesn't matter now anyways since you created a kekkei genkai.
I'll go ahead and approve this but let me warn you: this site has been dead for a while. Even I only check on it every once and a while. I'm not sure how much rping you can actually do.
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